Wednesday 30 October 2013

My Narrative Story (Running Away)




Once there was a little girl playing all alone on the park. The sun shines out as people start coming outside. She was looking for her mum and dad, but she couldn’t find her her mum and dad started wandering off without her. She asked people around the park, but they say “ No ”, she wandered off sad and worried until she saw a car, but it wasn’t her mum and dads car. She went back to the park sitting down and waiting for her mum and dad. The next morning a big horrible person came out of nowhere and tried to take her, but he didn’t she as quick as she can huffing and puffing having a little rest. She wonders of to a house asking “Can I please stay with you until I find my parents”, the woman says “No” in a meaningful way. She tried every other house near her and they all said no, but there was one more house a peaceful quiet home where she can smell delicious and scrumptious home baked chocolate chip cookies she knocked gently, and someone answered. It was a kind old lady she was kind and very polite. “Can I please stay at your house until I find my parents”, the old lady replied. “Yes you may come inside”, she bathed her and fed her. She was like a special mum to her.

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